A novel: a boy whose age keeps changing, and an astronomy mistake
- A boy is twelve in chapter 7, ten in chapter 27 and nine in chapter 41, and only a few months pass between them. We asked how old he was meant to be.
- A character explains that the moon looks thin because it is at apogee. In fact, that comes from its phase, not its distance. We asked whether the character's mistake was intentional or should be fixed.










